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17th-Jun-2008 10:40 pm
Fai - Innocent


One Moonless Night


His boots splashed in something that he hoped was water, but was probably piss.

Grimacing, he moved on down the dark street, avoiding further puddles and foul-smelling piles of shit and refuse, and only the gods knew what else.

His goal was a house at the farthest end of the street, before it turned down into the putrid lane that was the provenance of the tanners. It was a small house, but relatively tidy looking, old enough that it leaned against its neighbor across the narrow street, so that they seemed to prop each other up.

By day it was a busy house, clerks and guests and servants running to and fro. By night, it was no different from any other house on the lane. He did not care, regardless, except that he had grown up in the house across the street. Though it had been many years since he had returned to this dank city along a soggy corner of the great river, he did not dare risk someone having a sharper memory than he would prefer.

Identity was his worst enemy, for he was a man who did not exist – he had never born, would never die, was nothing more than a shadow that flickered in the candlelight, or walked beneath the moonlight for a moment before the cloud cover returned. He had no name, though if one were required, he had a list of them at his disposal. Some were peasant names, others lordly; a few might belong to a merchant, others to a foreigner.

Once, he had possessed a name that was his alone, given to him by the woman who had raised him in the house opposite the one he now sought. Sometimes, he remembered it. Usually, he did not. She had died, the woman who had named him. A violent, slow death, brought about by the wicked touch of what he now knew had been a particular poison. He had used it himself, before.

Her death had been the first one he had ever seen, and one of the few for which he had not been responsible.

Reaching the house, he tested the door. It was locked, but took no effort to break open. He slipped inside, grateful for the expensive rug in the hall that muffled the sound of his wet boots. It was a costly rug, even in the near-perfect dark. Nothing the owner should be able to afford.

He reached the stairs, and slowly climbed, careful to avoid those spots he knew creaked or squeaked. Reaching the second floor, he looked down the short hallway, and could just see a hint of yellow light slipping beneath one door.

Rugs in the halls, candles lit at the witching hour…simply more pieces of damnation that confirmed the man inside the lit room was far more than a humble shoemaker.

The shoemaker was a man who dealt in things he should leave well enough alone, who traded in gold and in blood, as it suited him.

A man who, it had been decided, would be better off dead.

He pushed the door open bit by bit, until he could slink inside, drawing his knife as he went.

Quiet, but bloody. Simple, but showy. Those were his orders. To scare anyone else involved into the realization that they were always being watched.

The shoemaker was bent over an expensive desk, writing with a good quill and ink on excellent paper, pausing occasionally to sip wine from a silver cup. He wrote in a beautiful hand, far too fine for a man who only spent his days making shoes.

Caught up in his writing, in his secrets, in the knowledge that he kept his secrets well, the shoemaker did not hear his approach. He did not see the glint of metal in candlelight.

He did feel cold fingers grasp his face, pull him back. He felt the bite of metal against his skin, but before he could gather the wits to react, the breath to scream, the metal slid across his throat. Blood spilled across the neatly written secrets, over the costly scribe desk, onto the expensive night robe the shoemaker had worn, to pool at last on the rich rug beneath his feet.

Wiping his blade on the dead shoemaker's robe, he sheathed his knife and turned, going back the way he had come.

He did not bother to close the door behind him as he reached the street, but left it open.

Burglary most would say, and feel a little scared.

Assassinated would whisper a few, and feel terrified.
Comments 
18th-Jun-2008 02:40 am (UTC)
Woah. @.@ Um... woah. @___@
18th-Jun-2008 03:01 am (UTC)
THIS is part of the Champion 'verse?!
*gulp*
*makes sure door is locked and things strewn around on the floor to trip on*
Nothing like clutter for home protection.
18th-Jun-2008 03:46 am (UTC)
Um...seconded this. Wow.
18th-Jun-2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
Thirded.
18th-Jun-2008 03:04 am (UTC)
... @.@ ...
18th-Jun-2008 03:09 am (UTC)
Anonymous
Roderick's past life maybe? Whatever it is, its pretty frickin' awesome already...
18th-Jun-2008 03:21 am (UTC)
Ohhh I love killers, there is just so much to explore with their emotions. I can't wait for more!
18th-Jun-2008 03:31 am (UTC)
*is trying not to swear here* Talk about shocking. This bit made my breath catch, and I keep having to suppress the urge to swear because like, whoa.
18th-Jun-2008 03:53 am (UTC)
Holy cow. Am currently looking nervously over my shoulder for potential assasins. Yipe! I be verra good now.
18th-Jun-2008 04:00 am (UTC)
Wow. Not what what I was expecting when I saw this was part of the Champion 'verse. Fascinating beginning, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops and who the unknown assassin is.
18th-Jun-2008 04:03 am (UTC)
o dear. you've piqued my curiosity quite well with this. i can make any number of speculations about who this is [assuming it's someone we know already- i'd guess roderick] but there really is no way to know until you reveal it to us. suffice to say, i'm quite eager for whatever commes next!
18th-Jun-2008 04:57 am (UTC)
Oooooo, assassin! *pets him*
18th-Jun-2008 06:06 am (UTC) - woah!
i like the stories you have written and this new one really took my breath away. really nice description of the action there. looking forward for more. ^^
18th-Jun-2008 06:53 am (UTC)
*________* ooooooooooh, shiny!!! there's something about assassins..... <3
18th-Jun-2008 08:35 am (UTC)
Just wondering, did you write it so that the people who work and live around the shoemaker KNOW that he is rich...? Or did you want to make him look poor in their eyes?

Because when you described the expensive rug in the entrance hallway, I just assumed that people who enter his home would see it and be suspicious of his wealth...? Or something?

If not than that's okay too. =]
18th-Jun-2008 03:00 pm (UTC)
Ooh. I'm sure its Roderick. I like the way you wrote it. Seemed so smooth and descriptive, especially the part about his identity and being like a shadow. Hmmm, speculating on how assassin-Roderick? might have met the High King :) If it is him, that is...
18th-Jun-2008 04:30 pm (UTC)
Anonymous
oooooooooooooohhhhhhh.....

Is this what you meant when you said that thing about the undercover agent falling for bad guy deal???hmmm....

inTerESting....
18th-Jun-2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
I think your prose just got up and did a strip dance right in front of me. I'm all eyes now!
18th-Jun-2008 09:54 pm (UTC)
*shivers*

Very promising...
18th-Jun-2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
Oh, yes! Mmm, gritty and real. And gritty. Mm, I love a nice gritty fic. With a surefire HEA, too. Oh, this is going to be a favorite, I just know it!
22nd-Jun-2008 05:38 am (UTC)
somehow I now feel less of an urge to clean up my room which has turned into a 5 star obstacle course over the last 2 months...
25th-Jun-2008 09:13 pm (UTC) - I hope you don't mind...
Anonymous
...that I'm an absolutely anonymous entity that stalks your many sites, reading, reading, reading...
By the way, I love your work.

this is from the Champion universe? sweet. that story was intriguing... I got one of my friends to read it, and he said that I reminded him of Elise.

you should write more about assassins. I adore the way this is written; the italics alone make it seem as if the words were slinking about in the dark. I wonder who this "shoemaker" was...? I also wonder about the assassin himself. what drove him to pursue a life of killing? I hope you continue this piece....

keep writing!

Flames keep you,
SJ
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